Before
You Put Pen To Paper
A Little About What You Need To Know
© 1998 Rob Van Slyke
So
you're contemplating writing songs or you've fiddled around
with it a little. Maybe you've even written a handful, but
you're wondering if you're going about it the "correct"
way or if there is something you're missing. It is hard
to figure out where to start or how far to back up.
The
purpose of this article is to introduce you to what is involved
in songwriting. I don't discuss techniques nor do I offer
much advice. There are certainly more elements involved
in songwriting than what I address here, but this will get
you going. Hopefully you'll know which books to buy or what
questions to ask after you read this article.
Before you put pen to paper, there are a few elements of
songwriting you need to understand. Almost a cliché
in itself, you need to understand the rules before you can
break them. Some of the most important elements are: form,
function, metre, rhyme type, point of view (first person,
etc.) and flow.
FORM
There are two commonly used forms and and a third I will
discuss, but there are many others I will not address. Some
songwriters will let the form of their song take shape by
itself and some will decide which form to use before they
begin writing. Which is best for you will develop over time.
The most commonly used form is
A - B - A - B
or
verse - chorus - verse - chorus.
There are variances to this form, but the basic form is
still there. One variance of this form is:
A - B - A - B - C - B
or
verse - chorus - verse - chorus - bridge - chorus.
The other commonly used form is:
A - A - B - A
or
verse - verse - bridge - verse.
Another less common form is:
A - B - A - C
or
verse - chorus - verse - verse.
It's easy to see the difference in these forms, but writing
in these different forms is another matter. I can't advise
you when to use which form because, as far as I know, there
is no rule, but I can suggest to you that you should make
a conscious effort to practice writing songs in all of these
forms. It will give you a sense of just how they differ
and how they affect the lines of your song.
FUNCTION
I've referred to verse, chorus and bridge. You should already
know the definition of a verse and a chorus, but the term
bridge may be new or abstract to you.
A bridge is a lyrical and/or a musical change in a song.
The change is often dramatic. There are other parts to a
song, but that's for another day.
Beginning songwriters sometimes lose sight of the function
of verses, choruses and bridges.
A verse tells the story and a chorus doesn't.
You shouldn't introduce new ideas or elements of the story
in the chorus. Verses should be tightly packed with ideas,
emotions, etc. and the chorus should tie them up. A bridge
can be used for many things such as emphasizing the chorus,
introducing a twist, transitioning to the next phase of
the story or changing the pace of the song to keep the audience's
attention. There are other functions of a bridge, but this
should give you an idea of how to use them.
RHYME TYPE
There are many different types of rhymes and not all books
discuss all types. I will touch on those of which I am aware.
You've heard of perfect and near rhymes. A perfect rhyme
is the rhyming of a words' last syllable. Don't be mislead
by the word "perfect". I does not mean that it is the proper
way to rhyme words. It merely means that ending vowel and
consonant of rhyming words sound the same. A near rhyme
is a general term to describe rhymes which are not perfect
and fall into the category of assonance and consonance rhymes.
A near rhyme may also not be one of these two but still
sound similar after the vowel.
Alliteration, assonance and consonance rhymes can be found
described in many books, but there are a few other rhymes
types that I have found that I can not find anywhere else.
Pat Pattison, author of Writing
Better Lyrics (link to Amazon.com), talks about three
other rhymes types: family, additive and subtractive rhymes.
These rhymes types are the closest thing to a perfect rhyme
without actually being a perfect rhyme. They can't be described
as assonance rhymes because, even though the actual letters
may different before and after the vowel, the consonants
sound the same.
When should you use which rhyme? That is up to you. You
should read songs written by the Pro's and find which rhyme
types are more popular to that specific genre. If I were
to just tell you that one particular rhyme type was used
for a particular genre, it would be wrong. In general, Country
music tends to lean towards more perfect rhymes (family,
additive and subtractive) whereas Rock, Pop and Alternative
tend use assonance more freely. Cowpie
is a great site to search for the lyrics of a particular
song. Learn how the Pro's do it by reading their songs.
Definitions and examples:
(However expert they may or may not be!)
I have used extremes to illustrate my point. You may choose
to use rhymes which are more loose or tight.
Definition:
Alliteration is the repetition of consonants at the
beginning of words.
A tree toppled over towards the tower.
Definition:
Perfect rhymes rhyme the last syllable of a word.
I thought of times we rolled in the grass
Then my tears fell lazily into the glass
Near rhymes rhyme the sound after the vowel and consist
of all of the following rhyme types.
Definition:
Assonance is the repetition of a specific vowel sound
but not the consonants after them.
Deep in her heart she knew she was his
but the line he was walkin' was pretty thin.
also
Maybe it's all for the better
That's what I'm startin' to think
and as I board this vessel
I won't look back at him.
Definition:
A consonance rhyme is the repetition of specific consonant
sounds but not the vowel sounds before them.
I could hear the music of the bell
that hung at church behind the jail.
Definition:
When consonants' phonetic sounds after the vowel are
the same, you have a family rhyme.
My heart was falling prey to her ever winding web
I was wrapped up more with each and every step
Definition:
An additive rhyme occurs when you add an extra consonant
after the vowel.
My heart went deaf
the day she left
Definition:
A subtractive rhyme occurs when you subtract a consonant
after the vowel.
The day she left
my heart went deaf
Now back to this assonance rhyme thing. Assonance rhymes
are the furthest thing from a perfect rhyme and although
they can be used in any genre of music, they are more commonly
found in Alternative and Rock songs than they are found
in Country or Ballads for example.
Take note that you can have hard and soft sounding syllables
after the vowel. If you where to use one word with a hard
sound after the vowel and use a soft sound after the second
word, you would have a difficult time selling this idea
to anyone. So if you ever get into a situation where you
are using the assonance rhyme, keep this in mind.
POINT OF VIEW
There are a number of aspects you need to take into consideration
with respect to point of view. Your chorus needs to be in
first person: I, me, we, us. Your verses can be written
in first, second or third person, but the chorus should
most always be written in first person.
First person: "I can still fell your eyelashes flicker on
my face".
Second person: "You ripped my heart from the claws of love".
Third person: "She was sitting on the road side with nothin'
but her blue boots on."
There is an exception to every rule and there are certainly
songs on the radio in which the chorus is second or even
third person, but they are written by seasoned professionals.
You also need to check your song after you've written it
to determine if the lines would convey the message more
accurately or effectively from another point of view. You
can often confuse the audience by not accurately addressing
characters in your story.
FLOW
Your song should have a definable beginning, middle and
end: Soul mates meet, soul mates fall in love, soul mates
find out they're not soul mates. This can be a very difficult
objective to attain when you are letting your creative juices
flow. Sometimes you will get so caught up with thinking
of creative words and killer lines that you lose sight of
the story. There are techniques and methods which help you
address this problem such as brainstorming and outlining,
but I won't get into to those. Just be warned that when
you finish a song and you can not define a beginning, middle
and end, you'll have find a book about technique.
Here are a few books from our Book
Store that will help you as as beginning songwriter:
Beginning Songwriter's Answer Book
Writing Better Lyrics
The Craft of Lyric Writing
Successful Lyric Writing : A Step-By-Step Course and
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