Judging
Your Own Material
© 1999 Harriet Schock
I had a realization recently at a songwriters' showcase
I was hosting. The talent for judging one's material comes
later than the talent for writing it.
Having
observed for years that becoming a great songwriter was
a most formidable task, I assumed nothing could take longer.
Even if it took additional time to become a wonderful performer,
I thought that would be the last step, that the rest of
the package would just fall together. From then on, I thought,
it would be a matter of growing in what you had to say and
saying it well. If you could do all that, surely you could
put a great set together, select your own material for your
CDs, and know which songs to put on your compilation demo
tapes. But this seems to require another skill, altogether,
and just because someone is a great songwriter and an incredible
performer, that doesn't mean he has this other skill. It
is the skill of judging one's own material, of deciding
which song is exceptional and which song is just good. I'll
go so far as to say the skill of telling exceptional from
absolutely awful is sometimes missing.
Frequently I've heard publishers, producers and record executives
say "He/she's inconsistent." Now I realize more than ever
what that means. It can mean the songs are not at a consistently
high level or that within one song, the quality varies.
Have you ever heard a song with a great first verse and
chorus, and the second verse is from Mars? I often hear
a song that barely makes sense until it gets to the killer
chorus, which is wasted on a song with lame verses.
A real record producer, and by that I mean, someone who
is wearing the hat of a producer - not simply an engineer
who's making it all sound good - a real record producer
will choose or help choose the songs on a CD. Even at the
level of Michael Jackson, when Quincy was producing him,
I heard that Quincy sent Michael back time and time again
for more songs. When Jackson was interviewed regarding the
success of "Thriller," he commented, "We just found the
best melodies we could find..." Well, the "we" included
Quincy. And lyrics were also seriously considered. So it's
not just neophytes who have problems distinguishing between
their songs, in quality.
Nik Venet always chooses the material for his artists, and
in many cases, gets the artists to write the needed songs
in the first place. Since he's not the writer, Venet feels
he has a perspective the writer can't possibly have. John
Stewart, Fred Neil and Dory Previn always looked to him
to choose the material for this very reason. In the case
of "California Bloodlines," John Stewart had 30 or 40 songs
to choose from. Venet was looking for just the right short
stories to make up the novel. Even though John's song, "Daydream
Believer" was a hit, it wasn't right for that album, so
Venet didn't include it. The vision to see the entire forest
is often difficult for the artist who's so close to all
the trees. Frequently a more external perspective is necessary.
That could account for why so many of the self-produced
CDs out there have no continuity; and there is a wide inconsistency
in quality between cuts.
Some writer/artists depend upon their live audiences to
give them feedback. And this feedback is valuable, to be
sure. But what works in concert is sometimes quite different
from what will work on a CD. I got talked into recording
a show-stopper type of song on my third album, and I really
regretted it. It was humorous and the crowds loved it. But
it no more matched the rest of the songs on the album than
a pink boa would go with a black suit.
Some of the reasons I think writers fall in love with their
homely children are: 1) They're new and every new song is
the best song you've ever written...2) It feels really good
to sing it...3) The circumstances of writing it were exceptional
(e.g. It was the only good thing to come out of a bad relationship...It
was the first song you wrote with so-n-so...It was the only
song you wrote on your vacation in Bermuda...It evokes lots
of pictures of your life you like to look at, but which
you left out of the song...etc.) 4) You've been asked to
do a 30 minute set, and you only have 20 minutes worth of
good songs.
Although judgment is something gradually acquired and not
easily taught, I will suggest a possible way to start. Find
your best song - the song that never lets you down, or anyone
else down. It could be the song everyone asks for, the one
you would show someone who really wanted to know you as
a songwriter, but had only 3 or 4 minutes. It's not necessarily
the most "hit" sounding song; but it the song that captures
most people when they hear it. Ask yourself what's in that
song. What is it about the melody, the chords, the rhythm,
the story, the pictures, the subject matter - really look
at that song in depth. Get into the experience someone has
when they hear that song. Does that magic occur with your
other songs? If so, to what degree? Use your magical song
as a measuring stick. Maybe all the others don't come up
to that highest mark, but is there substantial merit, in
how it affects listeners and you?
I have a student from Illinois who sends me songs to critique,
and part of what he wants is for me to tell him which ones
he should show, which ones he should rewrite and show, and
which ones he should consider learning experiences and discarding.
In his most recent note, he said "If you ever water down
your opinion on my songs, you'll never hear from me again."
Since I had been exceptionally frank with him, I was glad
he still felt that way. He apparently is aware that he is
not the best judge and wants someone else's opinion. Such
is not the case with many of the songwriters I see performing
or whose tapes I receive. On the same tape will be a masterpiece
and a cause for embarrassment. And now I realize it's simply
because the skill of distinguishing between the two is learned
later, in most cases, than the skill of creating the masterpiece.
Harriet
Schock is a multi-platinum songwriter/recording artist whose
songs have been recorded my numerous artists, nominated
for a Grammy and used in films. Her fifth CD, Rosebud, has
recently been nationally released. This article is excerpted
from her new book, BECOMING REMARKABLE, published by Blue
Dolphin, available nationwide. For further information about
her book, CDs or consultation, go to http://harrietschock.com
or call (323) 934-5691. |